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Friday 21 February 2020

TIIC Explanation Writing



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Title - What you will be explaining
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Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the (3 or 4) elements or steps in a logical sequence
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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.


Title
Be clever! Hook your reader
How to act like a good daughter  
Introduction
Make your statement. Be clear about your focus.
How to become a good daughter could really help your mum or dad with work so she or he can focus making some money for the house Example by helping your parent’s out at home means 
Do the chores make her laugh make breakfast for her get her something seriously for mothers day or valentines and also her birthday every girl in the world has the Ability to be a good daughter or son  
\Information
1st element
Idea 1
It is very important to always show kindness towards your parents. Although this can be difficult at times, it is important to show kindness to your parents because it shows that you respect them. For example, when you really want to go somewhere with your friends and your parents tell you that you have to stay home and look after your little siblings, it is important to remember that your parents have your best interests in mind. 
Information
2nd element
Idea 2
Anyone has the ability to be a good daughter. By showing kindness, listening to your parents, and being helpful you are showing your parents that you love and respect them. What else can you do in your life to be a good daughter?
Information
3rd element
Idea 3
Another way to show that you are a good daughter is by your actions.  By being helpful around the house you are showing your parents that you respect them. For example, when you keep your bed made and your room clean you are showing that you respect your living space. This also comes into play when you complete your chores without being asked. So, when you wake up in the morning or get home from school, immediately vacuum the house, put away the dishes and take out the rubbish. 
Conclusion
There you have it - 4 reasons as to
-why
-that will help you
-for you to try...
The Ability to help someone  when your parents are next to you could really show that you care  and respect the way of helping 
The homeless

Helping others is the greatest quality in the world of human being and there are several ways and numerous styles to aid people who are needed in life 

If your Family like to money to charity because there richer than the homeless and more successful and a girl or a boy likes to  give money to charity than good job if your parents denine to tell you to put that money back pocket don’t listen only listen to the one that do care about the homeless






Instructions: Take a close look at the written portions of the explanation written by a former PES student below. 
  1. copy and paste each section in the correct box on the explanation template above. 
  2. Using the highlighter tool (above next to the text colour icon), highlight all of the connectives YELLOW .
  3. You should have one empty box in the template. Taking time to decide what that empty box should be about, write the missing part of the explanation. 
  4. In each Information Paragraph:
    1. Highlight each statement BLUE
    2. Highlight each explanation GREEN
    3. Highlight each example PINK



Another way to be a good daughter is to talk nicely to your parents. By telling them how much you appreciate them, and answering back in a positive manner you are showing your parents how much they mean to you.  When your parents ask you to do something it is important that you listen and respond in a timely and respectful manner. For example, when mum asks you to put away the laundry, you should immediately respond by saying, “yes mum” as you stand up and put the laundry away without a scowl on your face. 


Another way to show that you are a good daughter is by your actions.  By being helpful around the house you are showing your parents that you respect them. For example, when you keep your bed made and your room clean you are showing that you respect your living space. This also comes into play when you complete your chores without being asked. So, when you wake up in the morning or get home from school, immediately vacuum the house, put away the dishes and take out the rubbish. 


Anyone has the ability to be a good daughter. By showing kindness, listening to your parents, and being helpful you are showing your parents that you love and respect them. What else can you do in your life to be a good daughter?

It is very important to always show kindness towards your parents. Although this can be difficult at times, it is important to show kindness to your parents because it shows that you respect them. For example, when you really want to go somewhere with your friends and your parents tell you that you have to stay home and look after your little siblings, it is important to remember that your parents have your best interests in mind.

Friday 7 February 2020

All about me

Hi My name is isaiah and i am a year 8 at Pt England school at Auckland new zealand  in Two of my classes is Miss Moala and miss Tapuke miss is my literacy class and home class miss tapuke is in my maths class she always help with my math sheet so now about me my favourite places i like to go to is Thai land singapore and Kuala Lumpur and my things i liked when i was there was the buffa public pool’s Animals like Tigers alligators parrots and the jam sandwiches also

My culture is spanish American samoan Tongan cook island hawaiian and moari but my favourite that i like to eat from one of those countries are American food and Tongan food also spanish food and moari food in my free time i like to play fortnite soccer Apex baseball play at the park so that’s all about me thanks for clicking on my blog and i like to play with my two dogs