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EXPLANATION WRITING

CHOOSE IT NARRATIVE

Choose It Narrative

Today you will be writing a narrative using voice typing.  In order to help you get started, use the picture below. 

Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have the FIVE elements of plot.  You will be creating a plot line after your story is complete. This may help you add more details into your story before publishing. 

Remember what we learnt in Term 1 about:

1. Hooking your Audience
2. Showing not Telling your story
3. Compound and Simple Sentences

Begin Voice Typing Here:

              THE Mission Impossible The Parody version

              Friendship edition

Stuff that includes this   

Tragic emotional lots of gasped 

Begin Writing Here: on Tuesday 11:AM in the morning 4 friends decided to go live in africa because nathan and sam wanted to teach marcel and finn the african way and marcel and finn said yes they got ready to go to africa they packed really quick

They stayed up all night just playing fortnite and APEX legends claping some noobs

One by one by one by one they started to fall asleep it's 11:PM in the morning they were shocked that they both slept in they got there bags they drove to the airport they ran as fast as they could but they had to stop because they smelled something yummy MCDONALDS they had there MCDONALDS they ran they started getting tummy aches  from the MCDONALDS they had just an hour ago they saw the door closing in front of them then they saw nathan and sam walking in side the door as it was about to close they gave their tickets to the lady who closes the door every time so finn and marcel went to another door which is going to the african jungle 

But all the other doors go to other places like thailand singapore tonga they went to the reception to see if there’s any chance that is there another plane going to africa the lady said yes it’s on the other side of the airport finn said damn it they put there bags threw the scanner and ran parkoured threw the Luggage’s jumped in a mini car that looks like a golf cart but there was another scanner for people and luggage so they went threw the luggage scanner but a security was on the other side two security they went threw saw some v’s on the security guards belt they drank it cause they were tired and sweaty they ran again 

That the security was chasing them they made it but the plane was to far then finn said come what lets jump no you better not you better not marcel said he jumped to the plane while the hallway was moving away from the plane but finn almost made it he was just 100 pixels away but wait he mad it but he was hanging on the lege 

Thin finn said save me please marcel said UGH FINE he took a big breath in balance his legs clutched his hands into a fist he ran and ran then jumped into the plane finn said pull me up they got their tickets out and gave it to the flight attendant

It took 15 hours, 59 minutes they heard a bang in one of those engines then the other engine went boom and we were losing momentum finn and marcel insisted to help the captain with controlling the joy stick the plane was going down as the speed of light.  right at the back a lady screamed right at the back of the plane there were two men who were holding nathan and sam hostage so the people who were at the back was trying to stopped them but every time they tried to stop them the men will blow the plane up to smithereens so marcel had a plain to stop the two men holding people hostage and stop the plane crashing into the sea marcel told finn to get my bag and help the captain hold the joy stick the he put his bag on told the captain to keep on holding the joy stick finn you need to open the big door at the back so i could climb in the back and knock those two men out finn said ok let's do this he grabbed his grappling hook out of his bag and a walkie talkie just in case for something that will or might happen in the future he gave the walkie talkie to finn and if marcel gets close to the door he will say open he open the door to the left of him shot his grapler to the blown up wing climb onto walked on to the roof walked to the flipper at the back grappled on to that and walked down then marcel graped out his walkie talkie to tell finn to open the door up. open the door it open and marcel went in but the grappler was about to snap he let go swanning inside at least he has another grappler for another thing like this he was trying to find a doorway so he could knock those men out he found the door but the door was being guarded by two men with Explosive and C4 and Dynamite the timer said it was gonna blow in 5 minutes so marcel had to hurry 

And save sam and nathan or it will be to late marcelso marcel disarmed the gun and  took out the two men with a suitcase but there was another guy with a gun an AR and a golden scar so marcel got two suitcases and got another two threw it at him then he blocked it then marcel punch him before he would shoot the gun at him he borrowed his guns and walked threw the door to save tony stark and dundee creed' the men were about to pull the trigger on them then marcel didn't know what to do because the gun were right by there heads so he had to bribe them or resine. with them  but it was too late finn and the captain couldn't hold it we were going down there was a big hole on the right side all the passengers were panicking and holding on to the chairs then finn saw a million of pharachuests for the passengers and marcel and finn and nathan he quickly climbed on to the chairs and the passengers. 

He gave all the passengers one Parachute each and the captain and the flight attendant so we all jumped and Parachuted to an isolated island that is close to africa we landed on the island but it wasn’t africa it was just a massive island that looks like Africa all the passenger looked for some food so they wouldn't starve to death

Marcel was covered with warm blood was moaning he needed something to eat marcel suggested to finn nathan and sam hey come here i saved your life so can you find me some food they both sighed at him and i’ll find some gears ropes metal wood for the fire it took 2 hours to find some food the hero then finn tripped over something a helicopter repeler the three of them yelled out to marcel and he speed walked over to them to take a look at what they saw marcel gasped and jumped then hooray were saved so they scattered around for some more planse parts it started to get dark and the four Adventures couldn't find anything so they called it a night everyone went to sleep under lots of palm trees and climbing up them so the rain won’t get them wet in the morning marcel woke up confused why everyone is but not finn nathan and sam they were the ones who were with marcel looked around under them over them looked everywhere they climbed down from the palm tree then they saw them tied to a plane that is intacct and perfectly to fly of into an airport close to the stranded island the mad people who done this was the people that took the plane down yesterday the people suggested to have a little swagger

The one who can run around the whole island using a motorbike that has a power boost 70,0000,876,50040067,60046978, boost power but they rigged the bike and it’s only 70 boost power that runs out in 3 minutes marcel insisted to ride around the entire island everybody cheered him on and it was about to start 3 2 1 GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gotta go fast he went off into the distance but he actually road around and freed the survivors then marcel called nathan and sam to get the plane and finn can have a american standoff with cowboy guns and AKA’s get ready to rumble bang bang bang pew pew pew pew pew pew nathan called out to finn and marcel they said hurry up and get on so the bad guys realize they were leaving so they intended to shoot the plane Engines and marcel is like wait there's four of us and two of them so they shoot them back they got on the plane telling the passengers to hold on and little kids try find your parents and hold on to them to marcel tried to find some explosives to blow up rare end of the plane marcel found some explosives

Work through this checklist before posting your writing onto your blog:

I have:
1	Downloaded my brainstorm as a JPEG to share on my final blog post.
2	I have had a friend read my writing and leave me next step comments from the editing rubric.
3	I have created a Plot Line for my story to include in my final blog post.  You have done these during reading, have fun with it and create your own using Google Drawing.

Once you are finished… Make sure your blog post includes:  JPEG of your planning A copy of the picture you choose to write about JPEG of your plot line Your story from above Add these labels to your writing.           2019, Writing, Narrative,

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In this way the tree of life is a symbol of a fresh start on life positive Energy good health and a bright future As a symbol of immortality A tree grows old yet it bears seeds that contain it’s very essence and in this way the tree of life becomes immortal As a symbol or growth and strength

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